Tuesday, January 29, 2008

revising my poem

I decided to revise my recent poem after, amazingly in a dream, "someone" suggested that I add it up:

The breeze whispers
your name again
gentle cascades remind me
of your wavy hair
such cream colored shore mimic
the supple tone of your skin
you are not by my side
yet you are everywhere

7 comments:

David A. Bernard said...

very pretty poem...thought moving about one who is in love.

Ric Vil Hori said...

thanks...(sigh)

Ric Vil Hori said...
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Sree said...

lucky,love passed by u,if not for long and to have gifted such love filled sadness :)

Ric Vil Hori said...

thanks Sree, they're like our treasures

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